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Animal VS Animal At Heart by Little-rolling-bean

Vision : It is efficient, straight to the point, but very average and not well balanced as far as the image goes on. Originality : cari...

Chakra -B.O.T. Page 117 by ARVEN92
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I already told you, I like your Comic and I absolutly LOVE your character design. What encourage me to add my critique was the fact tha...

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I needed to respond to :iconnewtoniannocturn: but that fucking troll blocked me..
So I will put that here until I respond to the bastard with another account..

you know and everyone else too BTW that you are just trolling and have nothing to back up your hateful words hence you use ad hominem tactics..


the thing about genetical respect comes from the observation that technolgical and genetical evolution are not compatible and tends to try to replace each other (technology aims to negate genetical strengths while a natural predator aims for the weak)
so I came to the conclusion that animal rights should be the equivalent of the right we got from the technological order but adapted to the genetical world of evolution.
It is not asinine and would clearly help life to be more efficient because the conflict between our two orders have been during for far too long and cost too much to the evolution method that gave us our body, our senses of perception, our abilities to move, our genetical strengths and what makes us human according to teenage TV show, our emotions..

We shouldn't assume that we don't need them to keep evolving the ways they have always been..
  • Mood: Artistic
  • Listening to: daniel balavoine
  • Reading: les touches du clavier
  • Watching: mon écran what else
  • Playing: PokeMMO
  • Eating: nothing and i m very hungry
  • Drinking: water
I needed to respond that to a deepshit but it blocked me so I'll have to put it here till I post it with another account..


you know and everyone else too BTW that you are just trolling and have nothing to back up your hateful words hence you use ad hominem tactics..



the thing about genetical respect comes from the observation that technolgical and genetical evolution are not compatible and tends to try to replace each other (technology aims to negate genetical strengths while a natural predator aims for the weak)
so I came to the conclusion that animal rights should be the equivalent of the right we got from the technological order but adapted to the genetical world of evolution.
It is not asinine and would clearly help life to be more efficient because the conflict between our two orders have been during for far too long and cost too much to the evolution method that gave us our body, our senses of perception, our abilities to move, our genetical strengths and what makes us human according to teenage TV show, our emotions..

We shouldn't assume that we don't need them to keep evolving the ways they have always been..
Animal VS Animal At Heart by Little-rolling-bean
Vision : It is efficient, straight to the point, but very average and not well balanced as far as the image goes on.

Originality : caricatures are never very original, it's always extremely biased and intolerant by bashing and mocking ppl that the author generally doesn't understand and doesn't want to understand and yours doesn't change that.

Technique : Well the only good point is that it is a caricature and a caricature is meant to be offending to the ppl caricatured, and even though yours is a bit ridiculous and absurdly biased, it completely succeeds in offending the caricatured ppl.
Now technique includes a lot of other points which your caricature fails to be good at : the image composition is unbalanced and boring as it's been said in the "vision" analysis, the drawing is really bad but nearly funny objectively which is what it's supposed to be, the use of computer default font is really a drawback that screams "look I write as bad as I draw and I didn't even try to make it look good" and the lighting, line of force and everything that falls under the composition category is completely arbitrary.

Impact : Now we've got something good, maybe I should just concentrate on the image and how it is built and then I could objectively put another very low grade but objectively a caricature is more than just an image and as a caricature, your work certainly had well more impact on me because of how I feel about this sensitive subject than it should have but still a lot of impact as it is a very powerful debate starter.
I needed to respond to :iconnewtoniannocturn: but that fucking troll blocked me..
So I will put that here until I respond to the bastard with another account..

you know and everyone else too BTW that you are just trolling and have nothing to back up your hateful words hence you use ad hominem tactics..


the thing about genetical respect comes from the observation that technolgical and genetical evolution are not compatible and tends to try to replace each other (technology aims to negate genetical strengths while a natural predator aims for the weak)
so I came to the conclusion that animal rights should be the equivalent of the right we got from the technological order but adapted to the genetical world of evolution.
It is not asinine and would clearly help life to be more efficient because the conflict between our two orders have been during for far too long and cost too much to the evolution method that gave us our body, our senses of perception, our abilities to move, our genetical strengths and what makes us human according to teenage TV show, our emotions..

We shouldn't assume that we don't need them to keep evolving the ways they have always been..
  • Mood: Artistic
  • Listening to: daniel balavoine
  • Reading: les touches du clavier
  • Watching: mon écran what else
  • Playing: PokeMMO
  • Eating: nothing and i m very hungry
  • Drinking: water

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